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| simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abusethe idea of hating tears was really interesting to me... and the piece is not what I expected, but I really like it.. the idea of hating them because they control your life is something Ive never thought of, but you described it wonderfully... |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHehe sweet, good free verse, good use of emotion, well writen, my only thought would be to make the beginning more intense, more sorrow, other than that, great work, keep writing. ~Lurid~ |
| Militant Poet 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAh, I like this poem a lot, it has a very nice flow to it. Your use of language is excellent, without being overdone. |