Reviews for Death Came Softly

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bulletcereal 2008-04-05 ch 13,	abusenice chapter. there's snake again. damn poor people. hm, i wonder whats going to happen next chapter.
helixdown 2008-04-01 ch 13,	abuseVery nice history you've got there, so Aubrey is based of you huh? So i'm guessing your really good at math or something, anyway, good chapter, update soon!
helixdown 2008-03-31 ch 12,	abuseOMG, all this did was make me anticipate the next chapter, great, now i have to sit here and check my e-mail every minute or so for an update, i wanna know! Anyway, update soon. PLEASE.
bulletcereal 2008-03-31 ch 12,	abusedamn it! this was so short it made me mad. i wanted to get to the next part. you're good at making me want to know. good. yah the whole part when i wanted her to die yah whem i read it was based on you i was like, "oh crap. whoops." but yah, you understand. but yah, this is coming along nicely
helixdown 2008-03-03 ch 11,	abuseoh no! Now Logan's alone again! Darien to the rescue! "What you really thought she loved you?" one word, OUCH. I really admire your writing, it has a certain, dark elegance, to it. (now i see)
helixdown 2008-03-03 ch 10,	abuseGood chapter, figures that Darien doesn't like Camille, i don't know why, but i don't like her much either.
bulletcereal 2008-03-03 ch 11,	abuseso sad, but if camille was only after the money than the birch can rot in hell and aubrey can jump off a cliff. "you actually thought she loved you?" wow that was cold. good chapter though. i think i get it. darien killed the hamlet dude so he'd have the biggest role and then camille so she'd be out of the picture. logan is going to get mad and maybe do what snake told him to do if snake comes up again nd then logan is gonna look at darien's dead body and cry then something is going to hsppy cause he's like what was i thinking. o god, im probably ** you off. ur probably thinking "Shut up. you're totally off!" im sorry, im really hyper right now. anyway, keep up the good work.
bulletcereal 2008-03-03 ch 10,	abuseooh i bet darien is going to kill camille.
bulletcereal 2008-03-03 ch 9,	abuseman this is good. ok im kinda slow at this, but who dd he kill?
bulletcereal 2008-03-03 ch 7,	abusewow he has to kill darien. snake is pretty kool, strange, but kool in that sick twisted way. the queen of spa\des. that reminds me off one of my favorite songs. ace of spades by motorhead. anyway, it was good.
helixdown 2008-02-14 ch 9,	abuseGood, not much in this chapter, but still good, update soon!
helixdown 2008-02-07 ch 8,	abuseI THIRST FOR MORE! So what was in the letter? Ah, dont tell me!
helixdown 2008-02-06 ch 7,	abuseOoh, i like snake, even though he's kinda sadistic, he's cool, i think he's my favorite character! Lol, yes, i'm the kinda guy who likes the evil people
Alivion 2008-02-05 ch 6,	abuse"She loved me, but then what’s not to love?" Ah, I adore Logan and all his egotistical nonsense of awesome. Darien doing drugs has me a bit confused and quite saddened. I know you're somehow going to save him but you better hurry up and get to it because our beautiful Darien is going to waste away if you don't. And this last chapter hails the return of Melody, hooray! I wonder if Ace is going to make an appearance as a ghost, a la Hamlet's father. And maybe you could go with my idea that Logan Sr. never died, reports of his death were exaggerated through Ace's hastiness. As for Camille, she needs more character development. I know this is all told from Logan's PoV and he really doesn't know her, but if you could somehow sneak a bunch of character development in there despite him, that'd be awesome. And as for Salem Witch Trials, this could be a VERY interesting development. Although it's cliche (Wheel of Time did it, thus proving it's cliche-ness), the main character having flashbacks that aren't really his is quite a good device and always adds a good amount of mystery, history, and epic-ness. Oh, and get to it on reading some H.P. Lovecraft, he always using the Salem Witch Trials in his tales. And as usual, don't rely on your spell checker. A "minuet" is a sort of French dance related to the waltz. A "minute" is a measure of time.
helixdown 2008-02-05 ch 6,	abuseWoah, is Logan's mother like a ninja or something? No, not really, i mean, how's she so stealthy? Oh well, good chapter, can't wait for more, what's this story gonna turn out to be about? Actually, scratch that, i don't like spoilers.

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