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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseThe tragedy of this poem rings quietly and then louder as it goes on. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming xombined with the complexity of the words. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| Indred Dragon 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful...moving...beyond! |
| torn pieces 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI remembered someone when I saw the name "Chris", anyway, nice poem, deep choice of words and that made the poem more lovely. |
| battleof1 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusewow you didn't even read over this did you? i'm getting the feeling that you just sat down one day and wrote and that makes the best type of work. not even thinking about it, just writing i love it, its excellentXD |
| lookin4nemo 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseoh this is one of the best you have written! i absolutly love it! |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusethe word choice in this is really wonderful..it shows how powerful the obsession is... all the imagery is very powerful and the whole piece is just amazing... |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseagain, very good. keep writing! |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is, as always, absolutely amazing! I love it, I can relate to it, it's perfect. Great job! =) --Katrina |
| Anaare 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, many thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated. I found this an enjoyable poem to read, strongly written. The wording is good and it has keen imagery. I don't believe I've ever heard of "double helix my disease" and it makes for a very interesting image. A good piece of poetry that captures the essence of its title. Well done. |
| Ecomsay 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat is beautiful |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. Great choice of words! Kristie Marie |
| La Vida 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's nice because a majority of us can relate. "To double helix my disease I feel comfort" gives a nice mental image. Thanks for sharing, |