The tragedy of this poem rings quietly and then louder as it goes on. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming xombined with the complexity of the words.

~the Stranger in the moonlight

Beautiful...moving...beyond!

I remembered someone when I saw the name "Chris", anyway, nice poem, deep choice of words and that made the poem more lovely.

wow
you didn't even read over this did you?
i'm getting the feeling that you just sat down one day and wrote
and that makes the best type of work. not even thinking about it, just writing
i love it, its excellentXD

oh this is one of the best you have written! i absolutly love it!

the word choice in this is really wonderful..it shows how powerful the obsession is... all the imagery is very powerful and the whole piece is just amazing...

again, very good. keep writing!

This is, as always, absolutely amazing! I love it, I can relate to it, it's perfect. Great job! =)
--Katrina

First of all, many thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.

I found this an enjoyable poem to read, strongly written. The wording is good and it has keen imagery. I don't believe I've ever heard of "double helix my disease" and it makes for a very interesting image. A good piece of poetry that captures the essence of its title. Well done.

That is beautiful

I loved this. Great choice of words!

Kristie Marie

It's nice because a majority of us can relate. "To double helix my disease I feel comfort" gives a nice mental image.
Thanks for sharing,