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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseGirly indeed but still cute. Awsome job! xKristie Mariex |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI like how only the last line doesnt rhyme and the way its formated.. it makes it stick out... the piece is kinda sweet... but as your summary says a little valley girlish lol |
| chocobabeh 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abusebutbutbut...i love you more >.> ILOVEYOUBABY ^^ |
| Ecomsay 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat is wonderful poem |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseGood, good stracture or rhymes, though a little simple, needs more emotion put in, other than that, good work, keep writing. ~Lurid~ |