Girly indeed but still cute. Awsome job!

xKristie Mariex

I like how only the last line doesnt rhyme and the way its formated.. it makes it stick out... the piece is kinda sweet... but as your summary says a little valley girlish lol

butbutbut...i love you more .

ILOVEYOUBABY

That is wonderful poem

Good, good stracture or rhymes, though a little simple, needs more emotion put in, other than that, good work, keep writing.

Lurid