Beautiful!! Truly beautiful! You should get this published. EVERYONE needs to read this. It gave me chills.

...And I love Weeping Willows...

I love how this poem tells many stories, and I prefered reading stanzas 1, 3, and 5 because of how each line is abrupt. Stanzas 2 and 4 had lines which continued on without any pauses or breaks, and it sort of threw me off a bit because of how the lines flowed on. But other than that, I enjoyed reading your writing. :)

I like this poem. It paints a good picture, and is tragic/sad without being overly tragic/sad. I don't explain myself very well, but I like it.

Keep writing!
xoxo
Eilish.