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| The Real Thing 2008-07-21 ch 1,   | I really like this. It flows very well and you conveyed the emotions. I like how you had certain lines in parentheses to give it sort of an echo. |
| d666lisa 2008-01-29 ch 1, | Good poem, quite original. The fact that you've chosen geese instead of a more popular bird is intriguing :-) |
| .crumpled.STIXERZ.paper. 2008-01-28 ch 1, | [at school; can't sign into my account] I love how it starts off with talking about being a poet (or not), and carries that theme until the end. Very origional. Nice word choice, too. -stix- |