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smile for the sunshine
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseah, that was so cute. i like this. it's really cute. i know what it feels like- or felt like. until the true character of the only guy i've kissed came out. dumb boys. = (

loverrly poem though. = )
A Distant Planet
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good, I like this a lot. My favourite part is the bit about writing poetry in your head while kissing.
kelsi bones
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abusehaha, i think thats my problem too: i got too busy mentally writing poetry about her beauty.

this is really well written. i'm not sure why you're so down on your writing on your profile.

k.X
In the Rye
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseIt's sad. I like it though.
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