This one sounds very raw; free and emotional. Like a breaking down moment, but still describes accurately the feeling of being overwhelmed, and writing really does help, doesn't it? Just so you can see your thoughts on the page.

This is intense, to say the least! It's mostly open to interpretation, which is interesting. I love the very last line; it's such a powerful way to end a powerful poem!

A little confusing the first time around. But after a few read through's it sounded a lot better.