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Comawhite13
2008-06-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was really cute... odd, but cute.
Purpose
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseAs so many point out random, but funny. I have a friend who writes like this and she always cracks me up.
Jenny Van Alles
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThe conclusion had me cracking up! How did you come up with this?
x day x dreamer x
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuse~random~

and funny :]


~srz
HGiel
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseVery clever, nicely done.
epsilon103
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseOk that was very random but it does sound like something I would do for fun
I meen imagine the bomb squad showing up
It would be hilarious to see this in real life
rust phoenix
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseWell, that was definitely creative. I like the last paragraph.
Troy H. Clem IV
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseRandom but amusing.
ChrnosMiko
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseHa ha ha! This is an awesome story. Sadly, it sounds like something my friends and I might do... ^_^; Still, I really like this. Great job!
Zephyr-wings
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseOkay, definitely ramdom, but it was fun to read.
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