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| XxMadHatterxX 2008-09-07 ch 1,  | abuse"Apparently it keeps God away too." love that line this is hilarious, yet strangely profound haha nice work |
| OneSweetLove 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHaha! You're writing and point of views are so funny! |
| laughing in her sleep 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abusei liked this! the last thing you said made me laugh out loud. i totally agree! mcdonalds is nastyy, he shud have picked that haha |
| hide your eyes 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThat made my week. Loved it. |
| Avelseth 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI will be sure to tell that to my dentist next time they lecture me on an apple a day keeps the doctor away nice twist |
| SheridanSpence 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseCute. Got a chuckle out of me :) |
| Words.Left.Unspoken 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuselol. Tis true, although I believe the Bible said nothing about an apple, just a certain fruit. But it was funny. The ending was the best. |
| Jon de Plume 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOne reviewer already said it, but I highly suggest reading “Paradise Lost” by John Milton. It’s a great read and gives you a very unique look at the story of the fall of man. Maybe not as funny as the Big Mac, but still a good one. |
| asylum writer 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseFunny. Great point. Now I'm trying to imagine a Biblical-era McDonald's. I don't know what that would look like. |
| Purpose 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseBut Big Macs are so delicious! |
| I.O.K.O 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseBIG MAC ATTACK! |
| Arcane Hero 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseLol! |
| im.a.werewolf.rawr. 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseGood point! |
| Xiuhcoatl 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abusehaha, i liked it. gave me a good laugh |
| Canoegirl42 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis made me laugh quite a bit. I really like it! |