|Reviews for A Queen's Descent|
| productioncity 7/8/08 . chapter 1
I didn't post any reviews the first
time I had read this story, so I
decided to start doing that, now!
I mean, I have nothing better to
do, so why shouldn't I write a
review on one of the most coolest
stories ever on fictionpress, right?
hahaha. so! I'm so glad I found this
story, because the first paragraph
just hooked me in. KUDOS TO YOU! :)
| blair powers 6/27/08 . chapter 10
this was a great chapter! post again as soon as you can!
| Izzey 6/25/08 . chapter 10
awesome story so far. i can't wait for your next update
| xclarissamariex 6/25/08 . chapter 10
Aw. This is a really cute story. I love the whole "Shes better then him, but not really." sorta thing. Its a different twist to the average cliche. Anyways, fast updates and unexpected turns kay?
Now a loyal reviewer for every chapter,
| Inky-Angel 6/24/08 . chapter 10
Geez, this chapter made me want to stab Liza and Gwen's eyes out with a spork. Some people just suck, honestly. And I know what it's like to be a social leper with absolutely no friends, and it's NOT easy. It sucks, especially eating lunch alone. That's probably the hardest part.
| DareSapere 6/24/08 . chapter 10
I thought this chapter was a little harsh to Zoey . . . but of course what else can you expect after what happened. I just hope that she doesnt have any new found feelings for that "Thing" (Jonathon) Talk about a jerk of a guy sheesh. And Eric is really sweet except for the whole Gwen thing which im usre will prolly be sorted out later lol.
Make sure to get the Update when ya can hehehe ill be watching *looks around evilly*
| claireponcherrii 6/24/08 . chapter 1
ooh this sounds kewl ;)
| simplycarol 6/21/08 . chapter 9
I don't usually review a person's story but I really needed to say something.
So yeah, I probably won't review you again but yeah.
I'm just way too lazy to review every story I read.
Please please please update soon?
I really like this plot/story.
I love it.
| funnechick 6/13/08 . chapter 9
So I just found this on an author's favorites list and thought I'd check it out-and it's absolutely amazing! I really like the idea of the popular girl falling for the nice, unpopular guy as opposed to the (cliched) other way around. I was so not surprised when Liza told Zoey about her being with Jonathan-guess that's what happens when fake friends turn on you. As for Eric though, I really love his character. He's so awesome, though it's horrible what's happening to him, or what I assume is happening to him. But I'm so glad that he so readily became friends with Zoey again; she needs as many real friends as she can get. Which is why I really like Tyler, Leo, and of course Erica, too.
I wonder about how bad it's going to get before things really turn around for Zoey, and I can't wait for when that time comes.
I hope you'll be updating sometime in the near future :)
| spunkswimmer 6/7/08 . chapter 4
I LOVE ERIC...and Zoey. the gwen situation makes me sad, because she'll get her heart broken... :(
| blair powers 6/3/08 . chapter 9
You write excellently! post another chapter soon!
| bad.karma44 5/28/08 . chapter 8
You know, I'm totally rooting for Zoey here...
But at the same time... she is kinda just getting that bad karma balanced out again...
Still totally rooting for her and Eric though.
| Ashleigh 5/17/08 . chapter 9
i demand another update. this story is unbelievably amazing.
| FeverCadence 5/6/08 . chapter 9
This is easily one of my favorite stories on Fitionpress. I feel so bad for Zoey and Eric too; I hope they find what they're looking for. Great character development with Zoey; she truly reminds me of a real person, not just a fictional character. I can't wait for more.
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 5/2/08 . chapter 9
awesome. so, now she's ditched her clique! it'd be super weird if she were to join Eric's group at lunch, or whatever. it'd seem like she was relying on him for support and that she was kind of like a pity case, i'd like to think she'd be uber independent and find new friends. ah, that's just what i think! i'm enthralled to see what happens in the next chapter.
by the way, totally wicked that you updated so quickly!