|Reviews for A Queen's Descent|
| belle1220 4/30/08 . chapter 9
Wow. I just found this story and it's very powerful. Zoey is a great central character and I love seeing her relationship with Eric growing.
I've actually shed a few tears through the chapters. You've managed to write amazingly complex characters. I really enjoy that Zoey isn't the clean cut, flawless heroine that so many other people write. She's imperfect and for that I love her.
I can't wait to read more of her journey and to see how everything plays out between her and Eric.
| Zephrie 4/30/08 . chapter 9
I am like in love with this story.
It is soo frikkin good.
I never bothered to read this before today cause of the summary.
I'm positive if you reedit the summary,
tons of people would read it.
| Petals of Paranoia 4/30/08 . chapter 9
I really did enjoy this chapter a lot. It really showcases how much Zoey has changed. And as for the thing with Eric's home life, I'd already had my suspicions about that. As for where I think this story will go from here, I'm really not sure. After this it could basically go anywhere. It all depends on how you base others' reactions to Zoey's outburst. I'd like to see her maybe get away from all of it for a bit. Spend some time putting things in perspective, surrounded by others who are less judgmental. I'm not sure how this would work out, maybe take a trip next break. I'd also like to see her explore new relationships. Not necessarily with Leo, but with someone nice (not Eric though). But before all of this, I think that she should have a confrontation with Jonathan. And by confrontation, I don't mean a big blowout. I mean a civil conversation, where both get all of their pent up emotions out. It seems to me like Jonathan really cared for her and is just hurt. I think they both need a little closure.
Well, those are my thoughts. I'm sure that whatever direction you plan on going with this will turn out great.
| Far.abi 4/30/08 . chapter 9
i love reading your story but from the picture you put up for zoey it's hard to believe that she would be the queen of the school. she's really cute but other than that she looks like a regular jane.
the other characters pics makes sense to me though.
| Angel of Ink 4/30/08 . chapter 9
Awesome. As much as I hate love triangles- and I do, with a passion- this is great. .
| Pione 4/30/08 . chapter 6
WOW! Very good!
| P 4/30/08 . chapter 9
Gosh, I love your style of writing! This story is now one of my favorites. :)
Keep it up! I SO can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
| P 4/30/08 . chapter 3
I really really love your story. I love your characters!
| insanity-ward 4/29/08 . chapter 9
wow, just wow. absolutely amazingly wicked awesome chapter! luved it to death! i feel like crying with Zoey whenever Eric and Gwen are mentioned together, especially in the last chapter. can't wait til the nxt chapter! PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 4/26/08 . chapter 8
Ah! The angst - goodness, I could feel the hurt when she saw Eric and Gwen smooching :O Is there going to be a 'story' behind it. Or is it a relationship? Ahahaha. I'd love it if it was the latter. DRAMA! woot.
Love the story, your characters are fantastic! Your writing is incredibly good, and I'm loving the story!
Can't wait to read another update!
| Pink and Black Sharpies 4/23/08 . chapter 8
My heart breaks a little when you mention Gwen.
I would also be completely happy if Erica came into the plot again. Other than that its amazing!
| Petals of Paranoia 4/20/08 . chapter 8
I like how you toned down the whole everyone hating her thing. It seems much more plausible now. I feel sad for Zoey, this whole Eric scenario is killing her. Although I have a feeling the kissing Gwen thing might not be what it seems. I think that Zoey and Tyler should go out. He's been a sweetheart to her through all of this, and she needs someone to take her mind off Eric, as I've said before.
| fantasy4luvr 4/19/08 . chapter 8
ah I LOVE YOUR STORY
update soon pls
U MUST UPDATE SOON
| insanity-ward 4/19/08 . chapter 8
omg! Eric you bastard! no way! now, i'm utterly confused! Lol, but i do hope it will indeed be EricxZoey in the end! and not like EricxGwen or something... wow, im so depressed now. anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]
| Ashleigh 4/5/08 . chapter 1
Do everyone a huge favor and upload more chapters! hurry! i MUST KNOW what happens next! THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVE IT. keep up the good work!