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| The Prettiest Banana 2008-03-23 ch 1,   | This sent shivers down my spine. Wow. The way you told this story was just beautiful. It's so sad... I feel so sorry for both of them. Sadly, I think a lot of people can relate to the feelings you portrayed here. Not so much with the suicide, but with the whole thinking that you've ruined a perfectly good relationship by not saying 'I love you.' All in all, this was wonderful. Bravo. OH, I nearly forgot -virtual hug- =D |
| Icicle Tears 2008-01-28 ch 1, | Well, I think some of us have been in those shoes before. I think we might all have. It's funny, isn't it? How someone else can write exactly what you've been feeling? And then you wonder, "Does it work the other way around?" And then someone tells you how it doesn't, because you're never good enough for them. Once again, kudos. -Ice |