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Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 . chapter 2
Beautiful story. It was sad, but at the same time made me smile. Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 . chapter 1
Great job at describing the store. "it was defiantly" should be "it was definitely". Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
jujube 2008-02-07 . chapter 2
gr8 beginning hope u'll update soon^^
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