I enjoyed this very much (while feeling a kind of revulsion at her father and pity for Heather at the same time). It's very powerful writing. Heather talking to herself as if she was someone else was a little weird and confusing, but I think I managed to sort it out. (Ben's her dad, right?) I wonder what happened to her mother.

that was so thrilling i just couldn't stop reading
but what i don't get is who is ben? and who is talking to ben?
but good story keep writting

heartbreaking and suspenseful... a lovely piece... keep writing