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| Bazooka Joy 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseTime to update on this one! I want to see what's up. |
| violin-lady13 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseadorable. great job. if you have a good plot line that's not overly picture-perfect, continue (maybe give some of the characters a couple of weird quirks to make things more interesting). it looks good so far, just beware of cookie-cutter stuff. awesome! |
| Doll in Pink C0nverse 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI hope my day can be something like that...actually I honestly hope the groom doesn't run for the hills. =_= Neat-o ;D. Keep it up. ^^ |
| Icicle Tears 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm...well, don't let your dream turn into a runaway bride. Nice imagery, and I like how you keep it together in your fantasy. Write it, even if you don't get reviews. All smiles! =P -Ice |