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Reviews For: And Two Shall Become One

Bazooka Joy
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseTime to update on this one! I want to see what's up.
violin-lady13
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseadorable. great job. if you have a good plot line that's not overly picture-perfect, continue (maybe give some of the characters a couple of weird quirks to make things more interesting). it looks good so far, just beware of cookie-cutter stuff. awesome!
Doll in Pink C0nverse
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI hope my day can be something like that...actually I honestly hope the groom doesn't run for the hills. =_=

Neat-o ;D. Keep it up. ^^
Icicle Tears
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseHmm...well, don't let your dream turn into a runaway bride.

Nice imagery, and I like how you keep it together in your fantasy.

Write it, even if you don't get reviews.

All smiles! =P

-Ice
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