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| xBlackSoul 2008-05-23 ch 10,   | hhe, nice chapter!... but if Kale becomes a vampire, then Marie has to become a vampire too! Update ASAP, please!?!? x xBlackSoul |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-05-22 ch 10, | Very good, like the way it progressing! Soul is spelt like that, not sole, and soulmate is one word. Kale isn't a very english name too, so perhaps you should explain that. Your chpaters are nice and long, just long enough ot make me sit on the end of my seat! Again, love is too fast. I know it soulmates and stuff, but love on first sight is really a myth. You have to get to know someone to love them, because you love is about the way they act- list about your body. As said beofre, REALLY good. I am likeing it! ~Lillie |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-05-22 ch 7, | I love your little comments on the end of the stories! They are so cute. So basically, from where I got- here are my opinions. Very well written, original ideas but I have one problem with Henry. You can't fall in love with someone that quickly. It takes a week of knowing someone. For that long, it can only be lust, which can and can't lead to love. Now, I have another small problem~ I think that you have too many vampire characters- I have no clue who is who, though I understand the women. I don't mean to be mean, and I really love the story! I just think if you consider these things the story will be EVEN better! ~Lillie |
| Icy Vampire Chick 2008-05-22 ch 10, | Holy shmitzel ! This is getting really GOOD ! So sorry if I haven't been able to review this before - I totally forgot to check up on this fic ! And I've missed tons, apparently. The plot is thickening so well; I just can't wait to see what happens next ! I command thee to update ! ~Jo |
| urbanfictionalist 2008-05-21 ch 10, | that isnt right. henry's a jerk face and i feel bad for kale n marie. hope u update soon |
| urbanfictionalist 2008-05-18 ch 9, | so is henry his brother? im loving your story s far i hope you update soon |
| xBlackSoul 2008-05-17 ch 9, | he, I just knew it, I knew it was kale! but nice chapter.. update ASAP, please!?!? x xBlackSoul |
| Black Rose317 2008-05-16 ch 1, | it's really good. Im hooked on it. I hope you update soon. |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-05-16 ch 1, | Looks really good! I will try and read it later, sadly no time now! Nice summary btw! |
| VexiVicious 2008-05-16 ch 9, | Wahh this is good! I'm glad it said flash back on a few chapters or I would have got lost. I'm loving it - except I want it to end happily. The characters are very relatable too even the fact they fell in love so quick because it's a stressful situation. Keep it up! |
| xBlackSoul 2008-04-14 ch 8, | wow nice chapter... and if I had a choice, I would choose for... I feel kinda guilty to say it but I'll choose for Henry... :S But I'm just a kinda vampirefreakie!! hahah, but update ASAP! |
| xBlackSoul 2008-03-21 ch 7, | really nice nice nice nice chapter! update asap! |
| Beast King 2008-03-05 ch 7, | This is wonderful. What is the best about this is that you gave the vampires in your story actual personalities and other atributes. In many stories, movies etc vampires are just one-dimensional monsters. Please update! I can't wait. P.S sorry about the lack of reviews. |
| Beast King 2008-03-05 ch 5, | Wow! So that's Kale's story. I had thought he was a werewolf actually. Sad. Now Marie's in trouble I guess. |
| sousie 2008-02-27 ch 7, | another great chapter !!update the rest soon |