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Alteng
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseI'm doing catch up again.

This is a nice progression from one sin to another. It reminds me of something on the tip of my mind, but i can't place it.

I am really bad at poetry. So I can't say anything constructive.
Sophie Stone
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseAha, I love this. On one level, it's light, but just beneath it is really quite deep. Only thing: I think you might want to add a comma in line eight.
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