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| Alteng 2008-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseI'm doing catch up again. This is a nice progression from one sin to another. It reminds me of something on the tip of my mind, but i can't place it. I am really bad at poetry. So I can't say anything constructive. |
| Sophie Stone 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAha, I love this. On one level, it's light, but just beneath it is really quite deep. Only thing: I think you might want to add a comma in line eight. |