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Her Wishing Well
2008-01-29
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This is so powerful and is full of raw emotions and the words are laced together beautifully. Your style of writing and imagery is amazing. I especially liked the lines "If I have a male body I am possessor. If I have a female body I am possessed." Although, I have always wanted to go to America and still really do, I found this insightful and impressive.
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