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Julius Gillian
2008-01-29
ch 1,
Aw no. This is more laid back and mellow than your others, but it correlates with your sadness. It's really good, keep this poem up it ain't inferior to anything you've written so far :)

I can relate to this, it feels like embarassment sort of how you can't convey everything you want to say to that person that you admire, or deem as your significant other.

I hope you feel better, you're wonderful.
Her Wishing Well
2008-01-29
ch 1,
This is really good, great use of imagery. Powerful, i loved it.
the big crunch
2008-01-29
ch 1,
aw, it is good!
'autumn
stars look smaller when you
squint your eyes and imagine forever as a thing.'
that... is beautiful. i can imagine just quoting some of your poems.
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