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| KelseyBell910 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abusethis was REALLY good. write soon =] |
| Whoaa Kayy. 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseokay, you got your wish: i cried. :( i just didn't understand why he was leaving her. could someone clear that up for me? |
| somuchformyhappyending 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was SO beautiful. you are amazing. bec p.s. going to my favorites! |
| euphorictragedy 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this was really good. I'm very impressed. I like how you left things unsaid so the reader can decide what's going on. I didn't cry, but I did feel the emotions coming from both the characters. I liked how you even made him cry, a single tear yes, but still. I'm a sucker for guys that aren't afraid to cry, lol. That would be awesome if you could write his POV in the next chapter. |