Reviews for An Open Letter - FictionPress.com

daniellegypt 2008-11-17 ch 1,	Extremely refreshing. I like it a lot. The intro sentence is a perfect opener.
Reversed Polarity 2008-01-31 ch 1,	This was amazingly intense. There's terrific metaphors, allusions, and similes in this piece (far too many for me to point out individually). Just know that each and sentence was beautiful, and I loved it. "I am rocking to and fro, bound in white straps, amorously pressing my feet into the spongy sullied off-white of the padded floor." That's my favorite line, particularly the "amorously" part. It's such a strange connection, but for me it works. I feel like I can't even review you; you're far too intelligent for me. Well that's not going to stop me, though. :D
Waking Adrienne 2008-01-28 ch 1,	oh this is really powerful. This is my mind’s description of all the things I will never accomplish before my wires snap. that is my favorite line i like how this is in first person, a look inside a person's head. 1984! love that book. anyways, a really good work of prose i think. very complete. =]