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| Michael l'oeil fol 2008-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseCoucou, ca va? is your trickster anyone in particular? "Out the crown the sightless river threads/In measured flows and soft degrees of light" great lines perfect image...a pounding flow running proudly and flawlessly. still interesting how you incorporate science in poetry. A bientot. Michael |
| Reversed Polarity 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWOOAAH...! There is an actual poet on Is that possible? You actual rhyme and attempt to try the impossible iambic pentameter of a sonnet? Where have you been all my life?! Amazing. Do you the mark of a great poet? When you reread his/her poems and find something new and exciting every time. You're that kind of poet, my friend. Geez, I don't want a f*cking review. Reading this was reward enough. :D Keep at it, kiddo. |