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| Aomera 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abusegorgeous language - great use of repitition, similies and imagery...very powerful. one of the best i've read to do with writing i think. i love the archaic feel it has due to some of the words you choose. so soft, but so hard! Ax |
| Reversed Polarity 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, great, once again. I must admit, I did like your other poem better, but this one's good too! I guess I'm a sucker for sonnets and structure. But I really like how you consider the writer within the poem is "wasting" time. May I ask what Shakespearean sonnet you were inspired by? Once again, you are amazing. |