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Reviews For: The Chronicles of Wasted Time

Aomera
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abusegorgeous language - great use of repitition, similies and imagery...very powerful. one of the best i've read to do with writing i think. i love the archaic feel it has due to some of the words you choose. so soft, but so hard! Ax
Reversed Polarity
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, great, once again. I must admit, I did like your other poem better, but this one's good too! I guess I'm a sucker for sonnets and structure. But I really like how you consider the writer within the poem is "wasting" time.

May I ask what Shakespearean sonnet you were inspired by?

Once again, you are amazing.
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