Reviews for You Love Me, Too - FictionPress.com

simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abuseIts interesting... the progression... I really love the line about being curled into him.. the only thing is that line, the next one and the whole i love you things makes it seem like maybe its more than a friendship, but other parts make it seem like its only friendship (like how you call him a friend and brother)... that left me a bit confused, but other than that nicely done
melbell 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abusevery nice. =] and i adore your idea of "beating him up"
.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. =] I loved it. It has real rhythm that isn't always perfect which makes it so much more believable. -stix-
The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseI like your setup, and your words! I notice that there isn't so much rhyming, but it doesn't always work out fine; I've experience that too. How you express your feelings to get your emotions described is really touching, and it's so clear how you feel! A great poem! Keep at it! The Reverse Edge Blade
Imperia 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusegood poem, it reminds me of a guy friend of mine. the ending is really cute too. ^^
maximusrexmundi 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseone word... YAY! claps =)