Thank you for your reveiw Midnight, if I get a suggestion for improvement, hows this
Lily of the pond
Keeps bees as her company
Before she sinks down.

Even though it would mess with the syllable count, "keeps" would work better than "keeping" on the second line, just in terms of flow.

The last line is also a little bland... I think we know where this is happening as well so tweaking that bit in order to give a better climax would be a good idea.

Otherwise, this is a sweet little ku.

Midnight