Reviews for Only You Sparkle - FictionPress.com

123454321 2008-03-09 ch 1,	Congrats on rhyming without it sounding like a fairy tale or nursery rhyme. It actually took me until the end of the piece to realize the rhymes. The third line ends in 'eyes' as does the eighth; this bothers me. It seems redundant becuase the third line doesn't rhyme with anything. -J.A. Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).
Fading Memories 2008-02-18 ch 1,	I never told you how much I loved this, have I? I read it quite a few times since you posted it here, and I love the honesty behind those words. "Love was lost and trust was gained". God knows I've used that sentence on msn for like a week, cause it's amazing and so true in so many ways... well, just know that your writing rocks!