|Reviews for Impermanent Defintion|
| the Stranger in the moonlight 8/18/08 . chapter 1
Really a shame the story it told.. Decent poem.
the Stranger in the moonlight
| simpleplan13 1/31/08 . chapter 1
I like this a lot.. it flows wonderfully threw the unfortunate stages of love and divorce... the descriptions are beautifully.. I especially love the third stanza because its obvious what its about but tis so poetic.. I also like the next stanza starting with screaming because at first I thought it was in relation to the last stanza... awesome piece