Update soon plz, this story seems promissing

lol this story is way amusing!! i wanna know wut happens... do Frankie and Nathan succeed in turning Gabie gay?! write more please

*Looks out at the sun setting from the top of a block of highrise flats* See that setting sun? It's setting because it's so sad it's taken you 20,0 years to update.

BUT CARLSTER. GEE. YES. REVIEW. I wrote an awesome review for this before, but my phone wouldn't let me send it, so I shall re-review, but I can't guarantee it'll actually be a good review...

"Why was this bitch still here? Shouldn’t he be fondling his straightener?" - xD I love how frank he is (no pun intended).

"“Well, I’m not going to deny that,” he said, briefly putting his hand over his mouth and giggling." - xD there's gay, and then there's THAT gay.

"He reminded me of a 50-year-old guy making up his mind about which minor to prey on. Well, maybe not, but I just like that comparison." - XD PAEDOPHILE JOKES

Heheheheh... butt buddy... hehehe. That one phrase had me chuckling the entire time. it's one of my favorite almost-homo things to say.

but anyway. yeah, it's been so long since you last updated I thought you just left the story or put it on hold. eh. either way this was a wonderfully cool chapter. i can't wait for the next update.

LMAO! Poor guy was too sh*t-faced to remember anything! XD hahahahaha. Epic chapter. Made me laugh a lot. :)

oh this is just cruel. You set everything up and then there's no reward. I want to know what happened at the party! LOLOL
I had to go back and reread the first two chapters because it's been so long, but as usual it's ever so delightful when I am reacquainted with your lovely words.
I just want more.

As much as I like this story, I have to say, I hope things work out between Gabriel and Natalie.

They really seem to like each other, and as far as I know)which isn't very far)You can't really turn gay, you have to be gay. And it looks to me like Gabriel is straight, until he gets drunk anyway.

As for Frankie, I hope he tones it down a bit.Familial love aside, he really seems to be attracted to his cousin.Which, as hilarious as I think it is,I hope Gabriel can deal with.
Because, even by just messing with him, he actaully made him puke.

Hey Frankie, you might want to start out forming familial bond with your cousin, before you try to form a sexual bond. Because it doesn't look like he loves you, or even likes you for that matter.

uuh, havent read this in the longest time...wow.

hah, i like gabriel.

theres a problem in the chapter tho. The blonde boy he was quote/unquote "flirting with the entire night" name's Keith, not Demitri...so unless that was on purpose that he gave him the wrong name (tho that doesnt seem plausible cuz he was hammered) and accidentally wrote the correct name on Gabe, then you should have made that clear somehow.

yeah :]

:kicks your ass:

No, I'm just kidding! I couldn't kick your ass after this adorable chapter. Hahaha. I will admit though, when I got the email update I was like, "huh? what story is this?" followed by, "Whoa! No way!" XD

But Frankie is just too friggin' cute and Gabriel is in such denial that I'm far too enthralled with them to want to kill you. :D So you're lucky you're talented! Hahaha.

Great chappie, and great to hear from you!
-Jeni V

hahahahahahahahahaha. This is great. I love how homophobic this guy is. And Frankie just cracks me up. XD

*crying from laughing so hard*

OK...it needs to be said. You are one hell of a writer.
I have to admit, I like this story, and I'm not even gay.

(can't believe I'm saying this...but)
Please update soon

lol@frankie and nathan.
they should so have a threesome! :D

oh won't you please update? *puppy eyes*
it's hilarious :)

i love this story its cutie please will you write more on this one and all of your other stories i've read them all like 5 times and you wont post anymore :( but please write more your a very gifted and talented writer

Cheers Annie :P