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| naomi 2008-10-01 ch 11, anon. | abusean absolutely fantastic chapter I cried and cried and cried when she saw him amazing |
| Kjersti 2008-09-17 ch 12, anon. | abuseIncredibly sweet story. Good language. I absolutely loved everything about it. :) |
| Libi 2008-09-12 ch 12, anon. | abuse2 weeks boom wedding? kinda fast dont you think? :P anyway really great story, I truly enjoyed it! |
| pinkguppie 2008-09-01 ch 12, | abuseAwsome awsome awsome story! Very very sweet and cute. PG |
| claireponcherrii 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abusechem... |
| vampiregrl2wolfgrl 2008-08-16 ch 12, | abuseOH MY GOSH! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE x10 this story. I has all the key elements of an amazing romance: humor, sadness, happiness, great sex... I loved it. It made me laugh and cry and smile. I bow down to your superior writing skills. |
| atreyu love 2008-08-10 ch 6, | abuseLove the story, especially Will :D |
| liveforthedream 2008-08-09 ch 12, | abuselovely story. I enjoyed it very much. |
| beezy 2008-06-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseforgive me if i'm mistaken, but here you have claire earning an undergraduae degree in law. to my knowledge there isn't any such thing. most students earn history, political science, or english degrees before going on to law school, which lasts for three years, the second of which is spent as an associate at either a law firm or in a courthouse. |
| violet blossom 2008-05-25 ch 12, | abuseOh. My. God. I love it! Love it very much.. this is definitely become one of my favorites story! Hell, it's even on the very top of the list! I like your character, i like you plot, i like everything. It's not too fast. It's just right. You still take your time on the details but not drag on.. It's just right.. |
| violet blossom 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusehey, i just found your story! i love it! it's great! i love your writing style especially the way you describe something. can't wait to finish the big apple series! |
| Heather F. C 2008-05-22 ch 12, | abuseOMG! This is like the cutest, sweetest, funniest and hottest and everything with positive adjectives... beautiful job, i really enjoyed reading it! and will... i want one will of my own, lol |
| Hannah 2008-05-22 ch 12, anon. | abuseOh my GOD! I LOVE YOU! I love this story, I love all your characters just. AH! I LOVE IT ALL! Thank you so much, your stories are helping me through a really rough time in my life and helping me to make some decisions that I've always known that I needed to make and just never had the nerve to. (lets just say that my ex makes Mark look like an ideal guy!) THANK YOU FOR BEING YOU! |
| VelvetWriter 2008-05-18 ch 12, | abuseGreat job! I really enjoyed this story. Once I started this, I had to read it all in one sitting. You did a excellent job with your characters. They were very believable. When I first began reading, I must admit I was a little wary when I got to the first scene with Claire and her three NYC friends. I was afraid I would find this too Sex in the City, not that that's a bad comparison. I continued though and realized the similarity in that scene was where it ended. The attraction between Will and Claire was well written. My only critique would be in the ending with Will asking her to marry him was a little sudden for a man with such intimacy issues but that is also what I love about the story as well. To me, the true test of a good series is whether after finishing a story, you want to immediately read the next installment. You did just that. I had to go and read the others as well. Very well done. Keep up the great writing! |
| wistfulpearl 2008-05-02 ch 12, | abusethis was amazing. i enjoyed reading it :) |