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| fairytale failure 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI like how you write with simple words to express exactly what you want to say. Very clear articulation. Some parts were really poignant, like you were discovering something important; I really liked 'that's okay. just/because i'm like that,/doesn't mean you need to be like that.' I think it sounds like a tegan and sara song. |
| randompoetry 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseohmygaww i can just FEEL the pain and emotion in this. |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abusehad a boy like that once. twice? three times. pretty poem. makes me sad. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Sadly there always seem to be people that don't keep their word. Nice work. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| xfail 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI know what this is about :( At least you got to see what it would have been like, right? |
| purple x pen 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseim sad to say i can relate =( i hope writing this has helped you, its honest and simple, nice =] |