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fairytale failure
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseI like how you write with simple words to express exactly what you want to say. Very clear articulation. Some parts were really poignant, like you were discovering something important; I really liked 'that's okay. just/because i'm like that,/doesn't mean you need to be like that.' I think it sounds like a tegan and sara song.
randompoetry
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseohmygaww i can just FEEL the pain and emotion in this.
creepy kiss on tuesday
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abusehad a boy like that once. twice? three times.

pretty poem. makes me sad.
Twilight Starr
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem. Sadly there always seem to be people that don't keep their word. Nice work. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
xfail
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseI know what this is about :( At least you got to see what it would have been like, right?
purple x pen
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseim sad to say i can relate =( i hope writing this has helped you, its honest and simple, nice =]
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