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BregoBeauty 2008-04-07 . chapter 8
Yay, new chapter! :-D
Don Sullivan 2008-03-29 . chapter 7
Fascinating so far. Hell, magnifigant. Keep up the good work, ma'am, I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Scott Landrie 2008-03-14 . chapter 7
That was seriously messed up, disturbing, and awesome. =/ I was expecting a graphic account of rape, seemed to be heading there, then she blacked out. Also, I'm ** up for being ** at that.
BregoBeauty 2008-03-10 . chapter 7
Yay, new chapter!

Poor Kimmy...she just can't seem to get a break! Chase to the rescue--not! :-D

I'm gonna send you an updated FT soon--I promise! :-D
Scott Landrie 2008-03-09 . chapter 6
Wow, I check again and there's four more chapters. Loved it all so far. Why, you might start to be my favorite author. Hope Stephen King doesn't go emo over that.
BregoBeauty 2008-03-07 . chapter 6
Yay, another chapter!

Me thinks Dustin's getting more and more obsessed. :-D
BregoBeauty 2008-03-07 . chapter 5
Yay, new chapter! Weiss's dream is still kinda creepy, especially after seeing a lot of dead bodies today...

Anyways, great chapter. :-D
BregoBeauty 2008-03-03 . chapter 4
Yay, two chaps in a day!

I really love Kim's reactions around Hammond and her thoughts about him. Especially: He looked like the kind of man you would expect to see standing over your bed with knife.

:-D
BregoBeauty 2008-03-03 . chapter 3
Yay, chappie!

I love how you threw in the Alias references! I could so see Jackson approving of it! (I'm still waiting on getting my boxed set--hopefully this week I'll bid on one on eBay.)

There's so many cute Damion and Kim moments in this chapter!

:-D
BregoBeauty 2008-02-29 . chapter 2
Yay, I finally reviewed!

Stupid, stupid fire drills, that's all I have to say.

It's great to see Kim's side of the college agruement and how she was going to sneak away (I'm guessing to be with Damion) while Kat and Jackson agrued. :-)

TTY soon!
BregoBeauty 2008-01-29 . chapter 1
Ah, don't shun me!

This is an awesome beginning to FA! I'm going to send you the new FT tongiht after I fix the edits in class today. I didn't quite finish chapter 14 and I think I'm going to change the way I have the chapters split up for 13, 14, and 15, but I dunno yet!

Kim and Kat are so funny together. :-D

Talk to you later tonight I hope!
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