|Reviews for Vindictive Metaphor|
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 19
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 20
you are so lavely
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 21
| Daily Judas 1/29/08 . chapter 1
I like the way you've taken reality and heightened it. Everything is too intense to be real, like a film with supersaturated colors, but it's all recognizable.
"Lethal warmth" is a great idea, but I think "tires scream" is too over-the-top: "danger-yellow" does enough.
I noticed that you have a few long "in-progress" stories going. I encourage you to also keep writing pieces such as these - small, controllable, poignant.
| KatieTheWriter 1/29/08 . chapter 1
That was a cool story!
| ItalianBellaGabi 1/29/08 . chapter 1
I love your brilliant writing.
So poetic for such an unusually beautiful scene.