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Reviews For: A Pocket Full of Fate

Lysarose
2008-01-29
ch 1,
Hur, lovely! Reminds me of Terry Pratchett somewhat. Not on the plot or characters, just the humour. :P Lovely! Made me giggle. Nothing worth mentioning because I'm just enjoying it too much. Hur, keep writing!
zailnar1
2008-01-29
ch 1,
well it is over all fairly decent though through the midle i was a bit lost and you seemed to repeat yourself with the herting/miserable thing but you seem to know your way about dont forget to reread your righting though
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