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| Lysarose 2008-01-29 ch 1, | Hur, lovely! Reminds me of Terry Pratchett somewhat. Not on the plot or characters, just the humour. :P Lovely! Made me giggle. Nothing worth mentioning because I'm just enjoying it too much. Hur, keep writing! |
| zailnar1 2008-01-29 ch 1, | well it is over all fairly decent though through the midle i was a bit lost and you seemed to repeat yourself with the herting/miserable thing but you seem to know your way about dont forget to reread your righting though |