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Waking Adrienne
2008-01-29
ch 1,
oh that was really good. very complete. the ending worked really well.




this line is my favorite

I decided that I didn’t like coffee anymore. In fact, I found that I never liked coffee. The taste was bitter, but if you added sugar like I had always done, the sweetness felt tight and superficial.

a really good analogy if thats the word. if not... its still really nice. lol.

keep it up =]
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