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Reviews For: Rescued
J-Ling Lime 2008-04-24 . chapter 1
wat drama was this from?
d666lisa 2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful, thats the best way to describe it: beautiful.
BeingMyself 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Wow, that was stunningly beautiful and deep. I especially liked the bit about the snow-globe, aside from the obviously catchy: "I forever need to be there as his internal reminder that he is not lost-- that maybe, just maybe he is okay," and, "never his love and always his life. And I'm not going to abandon him now."
sunsetLover 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
very deep. runs through the very soul of every reader. love it!
Kendal 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
This imagery in this is beautiful. Some of the phrasing and words you use in this piece perfectly capture the raw emotion of the situation. It is, in a sense, heartbreaking, and yet so easy to understand the motivations the narrator is feeling.

I particularly like the next to last line: "I am his stability, his sanity, his foundation -- never his love and always his life." You manage to capture so many things in this one sentence. It follows nicely from the rest of the events and feelings narrated in the piece.

Lovely.
Blossom of Life 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
Beautiful. The only way I can explain how well you have this, Beautiful.
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