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| electric feel 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusei love how simple and real this is good one! |
| perpetual questions 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the realism depicted here. Perfect. |
| Eve's Deception 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusei love love love this its so beautiful in its simplicity especialy the last line, it made me chuckle. dont know why though, i'm just wierd forgive me? haha. |
| hey maria 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI like the contrast between "you" and her, how "you" doesn't really care and doesn't see her as significant, and she is always thinking about "you." I love the last line, it's sad but appropriate. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this... the descriptions are beautiful and I love the ending... very bittersweet.. awesome job |
| Lady Fingers 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abusethis is so pretty and lovely i love every line |
| Faith Adeline 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusevery good. i love the simplicity of it. great job :) Faith |
| Enigmatic Paramedic 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely lovely, from start to finish. The entire thing is brilliant. |
| adsaige 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful and slow; a very well written write that leaves me sighing in complete understanding. amazing. |
| Kicking Poe 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseawesome. there's a rhythm to this that makes every word perfect. I love the second stanza particularly, not least because I'm a cummings admirer. cheers. |
| XGothSk8erX 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI think this is so cute! |