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metatextual 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
i love how simple and real this is
good one!
a silenced revolution 2008-02-20 . chapter 1
I love the realism depicted here. Perfect.
Eve's Deception 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
i love love love this
its so beautiful in its simplicity

especialy the last line,
it made me chuckle.
dont know why though, i'm just wierd
forgive me?
haha.
hey maria 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
I like the contrast between "you" and her, how "you" doesn't really care and doesn't see her as significant, and she is always thinking about "you." I love the last line, it's sad but appropriate.
simpleplan13 2008-02-03 . chapter 1
I like this... the descriptions are beautiful and I love the ending... very bittersweet.. awesome job
Lady Fingers 2008-02-02 . chapter 1
this is so pretty and lovely

i love every line
Faith Adeline 2008-01-31 . chapter 1
very good. i love the simplicity of it. great job :)
Faith
Enigmatic Paramedic 2008-01-31 . chapter 1
This is absolutely lovely, from start to finish.
The entire thing is brilliant.
adsaige 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
so beautiful and slow; a
very well written write
that leaves me sighing in
complete understanding.
amazing.
Kicking Poe 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
awesome. there's a rhythm to this that makes every word perfect. I love the second stanza particularly, not least because I'm a cummings admirer. cheers.
XGothSk8erX 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
I think this is so cute!
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