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electric feel
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abusei love how simple and real this is
good one!
perpetual questions
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseI love the realism depicted here. Perfect.
Eve's Deception
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abusei love love love this
its so beautiful in its simplicity

especialy the last line,
it made me chuckle.
dont know why though, i'm just wierd
forgive me?
haha.
hey maria
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseI like the contrast between "you" and her, how "you" doesn't really care and doesn't see her as significant, and she is always thinking about "you." I love the last line, it's sad but appropriate.
simpleplan13
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseI like this... the descriptions are beautiful and I love the ending... very bittersweet.. awesome job
Lady Fingers
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abusethis is so pretty and lovely

i love every line
Faith Adeline
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abusevery good. i love the simplicity of it. great job :)
Faith
Enigmatic Paramedic
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is absolutely lovely, from start to finish.
The entire thing is brilliant.
adsaige
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseso beautiful and slow; a
very well written write
that leaves me sighing in
complete understanding.
amazing.
Kicking Poe
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseawesome. there's a rhythm to this that makes every word perfect. I love the second stanza particularly, not least because I'm a cummings admirer. cheers.
XGothSk8erX
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseI think this is so cute!
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