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Reviews For: The Thin Line

Skitzodemons
2008-07-15
ch 5,
That's so cute! And you got the feeling of love down perfectly. Yes it's true, the entire part. I hate that you know how I feel sometimes you know that? oh well, get on soon and write some more, I wanna read more, and get the tempest one up here. Talk to me I'm bored out of my mind! Oh yeah, I have a job at the nursing home starting in august.
XXemoXchickXX
2008-03-16
ch 5,
the new chapter is so sweet! (sorry we got you confused!)
Spotluver26
2008-03-15
ch 5,
WO...write more as soon as possible

thanks
spirit
XXbrokenXheartedXdreamerXX
2008-03-15
ch 5,
sorry 'bout confusing you, XXemoXchickXX and i are best friends so we wanted simular names. sorry again. but a GREAT chapter! please update soon
XXbrokenXheartedXdreamerXX
2008-03-13
ch 4,
you HAVE to write more! my friend told my bout this story and now that i've read it im gonna tell all my friends...oh trevor... you poor shy thing
Spotluver26
2008-03-10
ch 4,
OMG, great story!! Write more as soon as you can!!

Thanks
Spirit
XXemoXchickXX
2008-03-10
ch 4,
i loved it. you have to keep writing more. i cant wait to read more!
darling81
2008-03-08
ch 3,
wow, thats intense. I wonder what will happen next. plz update soon :)
Skitzodemons
2008-02-04
ch 2,
An angry Trevor, is a smexy Trevor. LOL! I know you were thinking it too. Later pimp, I love ya'll. And yes, I'm using actual english, not IM chat. OH well, later.
chocolaterain
2008-01-31
ch 2,
WE! UPDATE! I lurv you! thankyou for updating and may i say that i can't wait for more?! Yes wahahahahahah!! And yes I am sugar high... i don't have anything else to say so i hope that you update some more and...yeah...COME TO THE DARK SIDE WE HAVE AL LA COOKIES!
chocolaterain
2008-01-30
ch 1,
I'M IN LURV! Please Please update! I personally love cliches! So please update! Thank you for making my day brighter by writing you wonderful story. You are a nice person that deserves a cookie. So you can have your choice of chocolate-chip, peanut butter, snickerdoodles, and lastly double chocolate-chip cookies, (all come with milk and you choice of napkin color. We have a lovely range of blues, yellows, purples, and all other colors. Please inform us of what you would like and how many. Thank you and we hope to do business with you again.)
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