Reviews for The House of Black and White

Reviews For: The House of Black and White

once rained for 2008-05-05 ch 8,	abuseHey there! I just want to say that this poem is really well-written, and the concept is very interesting. Ballads are hard to write but you've pulled it off very nicely. Keep it up! :3 By the way, a teaser of the third chapter of Shards has been put up. :3
Jill 2008-03-02 ch 8, anon.	abuseLovely installment, is there more? :]
Jill 2008-01-31 ch 7, anon.	abuseThe last stanzas were somewhat chilling. YOur rhyming is nice, it doesn't seem forced.
Jill 2008-01-31 ch 6, anon.	abuseI very much liked this part :]
PerfectionIsInTheEyes 2008-01-31 ch 7,	abuseThis poem is NOT getting the attention it deserves. I really love this, more than I can say. The only thing I have against this is that every time I read it, I feel like rhyming. I really think this chapter is my favorite. It's so mysterious and ominous. It almost freaks me out. Anyway, keep writing, sweetie. Though you won't agree, your writing is greatest peice of literature I've read since A Tall Tale Heart.
Jill 2008-01-30 ch 4, anon.	abusevery interesting, i like how you describe their house as black and white. i'd like to know what happens next if your poem is not yet complete. :]
KaylaKoala 2008-01-30 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is very interesting because it shows this strange couples dichotomy... It's wonderful in the fact that the syntax seems to allude to the fact that there is something larger, more omnious behind their 'walls'. The analytical undercurrents makes me wonder if this can possibly be related to all relationships in general, or is specifically applied to a relationship of segregation and the way society is perverted to the point of relentless suspicion and gossip. Keep bein fantastic and making me think. ^_^
KaylaKoala 2008-01-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is a really really great continuation off the first part... It makes me wonder what's going to happen, if their solitude and seperation is going to crack, what's beneath their shiney and unshaken vinear of life... What really goes on in their relationship? Do they just deteriorate like the house, never changing, but aging? I love it! It's fantastic, really makes me think, and ponder about the hidden analytical message. ^_^ Wonderful job and kudos to you!
KaylaKoala 2008-01-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is really intriguing, I love the depth and mystery in this piece. It's exciting and alluring, and I love how you draw in the reader through your diction...it's not overly encumbant, but it is sophisticated. I love it, and I'm looking forward to future pieces. ^_^

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