"The simplest words, yet so much meaning" is fine, but in the next line it should be a comma instead of a period. And if its not in stanzas, why isn't there any space between the lines?

Other than that, it is really good.

I love the whole idea of holding on to something or it holding onto you and you described it wonderfully... the word choice is great and you can definitely feel the desperation in the piece.. two things I didn't really like...

I hold on to the remaining threads/Thread of hope.. it seems repetitive to me... and not in a good way, but if you like the repetition you should still pick either thread or threads...

So much attachment.There are all these lies... that seemed like an awkward line because no other line has two different sentences in them... i would separate it

Anyhow... great piece