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Reviews For: Echoing Emptiness
writes between the lines 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
it was hard to read. the spacing does nothing for it.
its a bit cliche and dramatic.
it could be really good, it just needs a bit of work.
Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
interesting use of repetition. Very thought-provoking.
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