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| xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-31 ch 1,   | Beautiful. The imagery was lovely and really came alive for me. It reminded me of my Aunt's farm in the south where you could get lost in the sky. The mood of this piece is so innocent and beautiful and you've really done a great job capturing and portraying the feeling of freedom. Well done. |