Reviews for To the Fog, Adieu

alicer
2008-01-30
ch 1,

abuseOh metephorical I think. Better than most stuff here but totally not my taste.

thugs, who gathered on the curved street,

(as rain might in pancake puddles)

I stumbled twice; lost without feet.

that part was sort of awkward? Lost without feet. Weird.

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