Heh... first time I've heard of a guy writing a fluff fic, not to be sexist, but... yeah... This was surprisingly good for a fluff fic. Cool.

-Hazard

aw, it's so cute- which makes me sound really superficial. But I generally love it and would love to know what they had been fighting about.

I love this! Just enough to get me into it without killing me! Really good work! Keep it up!

NR

Hahaha oh you're a guy?
I liked this story as soon as I found out you were a guy just because that fact made me giggle.

Anyway, interesting bit about the sunglasses.
Otherwise very cheesy. Kind of like the thing I used to write when I was, well, ten and liked to write stories about guys doing that sort of thing. Um. I talk about myself too much in my reviews. So yeah. Not poorly written though.