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payphoned 2008-02-27 . chapter 1
Ooh, nice poem. I like it.
burning in effigy 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
kind of confusing to me... the wording is a little awkward at times, but that might be purposeful

but i do like how it goes in a circle from point to point

simple ending but kind of has this eerie vibe
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