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Reviews For: Just a Boy
HMH
2008-05-28
ch 1, 		abuseLyrical, good rhythm.
Yellow Duvet
2008-01-31
ch 1, 		abuseHmm ... really interesting. It took me a while to comprehend but I liked that, it made it almost mysterious. I loved the repetition, it fit perfectly, and your choice of words flowed so beautifully. Great job, really.
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