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| Lord Of The Marsh 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseTo Helena- Sorry to respond this way, but there was no other way to answer you. I figure it's okay since it's my story. No, this is not true, merely written in an in-universe style. Yes, I have read the CON, and that line was lifted almost verbatim from MN, and yes, I have read and greatly enjoyed the Screwtape Letters. Happy reading! `Excelsior! |
| Helena 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuse"How cleverly they defend hemselves of anything hat ill o hem ood!", you wrote he ngel aid. How odd. Have you ever read the Chronicles of Narnia? I ave no dea if ny f his s rue tory, and raelly, ince you said you were nspiried o rite it, ell nyway, I can't magine someone walking into tore, nd finding an ngel and emon fighting over he person, but you see, if you ver o ead thos ooks f Narnia, which ere written by C. S. Lewis, one f he caractors, the Lion Aslan, who is meant to be representation of Jesus, or symbol, r however you ay it, says he same thingk, in he first book. I just ind it odd, ecause I ave never read it anywhere else, other han hose books, spoken by Aslan. Yes, I o ee he point f he tory, even if t didn't eally happen. However you wrote it, I think you ade your point clearly, but it's not people who sully see fights etween ngels nd battles. Yes, f you ead the book f revelation, it ays hat Michael nd his ngels faught he ragon nd his ngels aught back, but I think michael's trength came not from his wn trength, butfrom God, nd I on't know how it s written xactly, but it ad omething o do ith the word f he testimony f Jesus. Read it. It's n revelations chapter twelve. Your tory made he point hat here s God, though in an odd way. Yet, I'm sure it will draw people closer o God, if that was your purpose for writing it. Have you ever read The Screw-tape Letters? C.S. Lewis wrote hem as well. It's bout ne emon writing o another emon, nd elling him how o empt hese people. |
| Mercyette 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHmm interesting piece here. A little strange, but that's always cool too. I like how Kayla called him a Once Born. That was pretty unique. Nice touch and good story! |