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Reviews For: Cream and Sugar
vitriolicvertigo 2009-07-02 . chapter 1
This is a masterpiece.
It's hopeful and bitter and sweet and sad.
The characters are real people and oh, I cried.
Rurikei 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
I really like this story - it's not too serious (well, compared to some others) but it still does skim upon subjects that people -will- end up thinking about at one point in their lives.

It was a good oneshot. Nice, and...well, for the lack of anything else to say, I don't like coffee either, haha.

Thank you for sharing this~

- Rurikei
BoarderKC 2008-02-27 . chapter 1
This is possibly one of the best things I have read on fictionpress. You have an amazing way with words and I am ultra impressed by the sustained use of second-person narrative in such a long story. I thought this was beautifully written with an very strong voice.
pretty little stranger 2008-01-30 . chapter 1
wow, this is a really good fic. r u gonna continue? cause dammit u should cause u got me hooked with the Epilogue/Prologue thingy :D
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