:)

Do update soon please!!

I love how she feels the same way I do when it comes to love lol. Ah, young love, so sweet, so innocent, so not happening to me. Hell, I don't even think that that would happen to me even after I got engaged, and even that would probably be arranged. Now I shall stop my incessant rambling.

Haha, a Ramadan soap opera...wow, nice lol:D

I love it!! I really especially like the female protagonist, and I could be biased since I can relate to her, because I am also Muslim and have gone through my fair share of 'terrorist', 'now, don't go and bomb us on that note', and 'if I asked you for your notes, you promise not to send Saddam to kill me too', so I understand exactly what Layal is going through, and it's nice to see a character like her, atypical from the traditional quiet, thoughtful plain Jane, or the school nerd or whatever. So needless to say, I'm really looking forward to reading this, and I'm SO GLAD that there is finally a Muslim girl, who is a female lead. The only other one I have seen here on Fiction Press, is from my story Guy of My Dreams, and that's because it's ME lol, and I took that story down to edit it here and there. So now to proceed with the story:D

can't wait to see what happens next! :D

"Yeah, yeah, now get out, I have my period," I lied, just wanting him to leave so I could finish my list of 10 Reasons Ryder and I Shouldn't Be Partnered on Such a Huge Project.

"You didn't tell me?" he asked, mock-hurt. "But I tell you everything!"

"Fine," I laughed. "Next time you get your period, don't tell me!"

love that part :D

i think that if a part has you stuck. just sit and wait it out for a bit, come back to it later and try writing it.

Don't skip it, just have a lot of awkward questions and embarassing moments. or, u could make it super quick and have them be lyk hi, by!

loved it
please update if not finished
if not all be reviewing u pretty soon
:)

Isnt River Island a high street shops only in the Uk - or possible Europe too
But Im pretty sure its not in the US

u kNow 8's up 2 u n wHere u r coMfortable wd as long as ur stoRy coNtinues as it was.. u knoW i reaLly stiCk 2 ur stoRy and i juZ' sTart maKing acCount bcoz' of ur stoRy so pLs conTinue maKing 8.. we luV u so muCh and of cuRz ur stoRy..

sydney white - pls. coNtinue n doiNg ds story bCoz' u'Ll kNow daT n evEry chApter u maDe s u mAde sum1 haPpy lyK me.. ur stoRy was introDuced by sum1 dear 2 me.. i was drAwn by ds stoRy.. pls. u're a very gud writer and doN't get boRed or mad to write f u'Ve oLredi stArted 8.. guD luck.. i reaLly lyk 8..

i want the next chapter!


i can't wait to see the reaction of her brother...



i really want to read the next one!




i have a question, when did you spent you Eidl Fit'r?

babe