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Luke's FaT 2008-12-07 . chapter 1
loved it
please update if not finished
if not all be reviewing u pretty soon
:)
JKl 2008-11-25 . chapter 15
Isnt River Island a high street shops only in the Uk - or possible Europe too
But Im pretty sure its not in the US
sydney white 2008-10-28 . chapter 19
u kNow 8's up 2 u n wHere u r coMfortable wd as long as ur stoRy coNtinues as it was.. u knoW i reaLly stiCk 2 ur stoRy and i juZ' sTart maKing acCount bcoz' of ur stoRy so pLs conTinue maKing 8.. we luV u so muCh and of cuRz ur stoRy..
sydney white 2008-10-28 . chapter 18
sydney white - pls. coNtinue n doiNg ds story bCoz' u'Ll kNow daT n evEry chApter u maDe s u mAde sum1 haPpy lyK me.. ur stoRy was introDuced by sum1 dear 2 me.. i was drAwn by ds stoRy.. pls. u're a very gud writer and doN't get boRed or mad to write f u'Ve oLredi stArted 8.. guD luck.. i reaLly lyk 8..
folsom 2008-10-18 . chapter 19
i want the next chapter!


i can't wait to see the reaction of her brother...



i really want to read the next one!




i have a question, when did you spent you Eidl Fit'r?
daling 2008-10-04 . chapter 19
babe
daling 2008-10-04 . chapter 5
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benozir 2008-09-22 . chapter 19
that was awesome!! please cintinue wrintng!!
mina 2008-09-22 . chapter 19
insatiablehunger28 here,
THANKS and a zillion kisses and cupcakes! You finally updated! I hope you do write the parents part, cause i think you can do it. it sounds great so far. i would like you to write the meet the parents part, but if you can't , you still have too!! I have too much at stake here on your stroy. and yes i am trying to guilt you into writing it. hope it works.
rosieroo 2008-09-21 . chapter 19
seriously, i dont particularly mind if you do or dont add it in.
if you dont want to write it, dont!
:)
bluehyperpixie 2008-09-21 . chapter 19
I love your story! I'm a Slightly hyper sarcastic Muslim girl myself so I can totally relate! Ryder and riding school ..LOL

About the story:

they're rock star and his kid wife with a kid who may or may not be cutting himself! There's loads of potential there!

If that doesn't help, then make fun of Estelle, She's a french supermodal, they just ask to be made fun of.
Kohlomere 2008-09-21 . chapter 19
I dunno, it's fun but if it's causing you to suffer move on.

Great to have you back,
E.
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-09-20 . chapter 19
Yay you updated!! w00t!
Keep the parents bit! It's funny!
Glad to see that you're still going with the story and stuff! So until next time!!
Update soon!! :D

HC
funnechick 2008-09-20 . chapter 19
If it makes you update faster, I don't care if you skip the meeting the parents thing.
sweets555 2008-09-19 . chapter 19
skip it if it means you'll update faster!!
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